Project 1 Reflection
- Austin Eassa
- Jul 23, 2017
- 1 min read
After meeting for the conference and getting feedback for how my essay was progressing I learned that I truly did understand the prompt and needed to just do some minor edits. Although I am already at the word limit for the assignment, I need to take out a section about erosion which I can implement into my second project. It was suggested that I do a better job describing what coral bleaching is and describe the diving locations I reference in the paper. Overall, I like where my essay is going and appreciate the changes that were suggested to make a stronger writing assignment. Once fixing this essay a bit and doing some proof reading and grammar checks I should be close to done with the project.
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